See below the 2nd draft of our opening sequence:
On reflection of this second draft, we have decided that the following changes are necessary:
- Remove music from when Luke shouts "cut" to when he hands Charlotte the camera (so as not to reveal that something is about to happen)
- Rectify a continuity flaw when Charlotte sits down (as her face moves up slightly), by placing a title credit slide between the shots
- Rectify a continuity flaw when Ryan and Luke set off to find Charlotte (they are already walking and in the previous shot, they were not), by placing a title credit slide between the shots
- Cut to 'Isolation' title, rather than fading - for more dramatic impact
- Minor adjustments to the music to make it align better
- Reset the audio adjustments on Charlotte's scream to get the original, without the "muffled" effect
Signed: Sam, Luke, Charlotte, Ryan
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