Thursday, 13 January 2011

Opening Sequence: 1st Draft

When out shooting the first draft of our film, we made a few slight alterations to that planned in the storyboard. We have listed these below:


  • Removed the scene when a figure is seen on the screen (this creates an enigma, as it leaves the audience anticipating what she saw in the camera recording.
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See below the 1st draft of our opening sequence:


On reflection of this first draft, we have decided that the following changes are necessary:
  • Change the fonts to make them more easily readable, and less "over-the-top"
  • Desaturate the opening chase sequence to distinguish between the film, and the film within the film
  • Lower the volume of the scream and make it sound more distant
  • Sort out the long poses between dialogue by overlapping the audio onto the previous shot
  • Re-shoot the shot where Charlotte's hand is dragged away to enhance the realism
  • Crop off the "DIVX" logo from the Warner Bros logo
  • Change the 'Ken Burns Zoom Effect' on the 'Killer Productions' logo to make it central
  • Add suitable music over the silence, after it is revealed that the chase scene was merely a film
  • Re-arrange the music at the end of the sequence, as it sounds quite clustered and all over the place
Signed: Sam, Luke, Charlotte, Ryan

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